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05 January 2017 @ 10:38 pm
[The Real LJ Idol Season 10] Week 4: Not What You Do but How Do You Want to Feel  
Not What You Do but How Do You Want to Feel

Haven't yet figured out this year's goals
But I think I've figured out the feelings
Fierce yet flexible, flowing, creative, clear
Stretching, soaring but comfortable
Knowing these are
better intuitive guideposts
they're what makes the year feel good
And after the last year
where dreams suddenly came true
almost out of nowhere
combined with loss and fear
at the time of transitions
I know that what I need
is to set the foundations first
the things that will make
this cycle smooth and decisive
So I can see which way to turn
To be where I want to go



(This was written for therealljidol Season 10 Week 4: “I don't skate to where the puck is. I skate to where the puck is going to be.")



This entry was originally posted at http://dreamwriters.dreamwidth.org/36341.html.
 
 
 
tonithegreat: cattonithegreat on January 6th, 2017 04:20 am (UTC)
Here's to smooth and decisive! I enjoyed your poem.
Lisameridian_rose on January 8th, 2017 04:28 pm (UTC)
I like this :) A vote from me.
dmousey: pic#125576541dmousey on January 8th, 2017 06:50 pm (UTC)
Let's add some peace and joy to that cycle! Hugs~~~D
Ink Wellpenpusher on January 8th, 2017 10:01 pm (UTC)
Positive outlook and nicely phrased poem.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphorshalfshellvenus on January 9th, 2017 12:49 am (UTC)
I hope the year goes well for you, and that you're a able to keep that passion while also being adaptive-- it's a hard combination to pull off.
Kellykajel on January 9th, 2017 03:10 am (UTC)
Nicely done.
rayasorayaso on January 9th, 2017 05:01 pm (UTC)
Well done -- I hope you have a great year.
Jenmy_name_is_jenn on January 9th, 2017 10:56 pm (UTC)
I really like the flow of this.
MamaCheshirecheshire23 on January 10th, 2017 05:02 am (UTC)
I really liked the line "they're what makes the year feel good." Nice work!
dee_aar2dee_aar2 on January 10th, 2017 07:54 am (UTC)
When dreams do come true unexpectedly ... the feelings of fear and loss do accompany. I could relate to that so much. I agree with the feelings you have decided to equip yourself with to face the current year .... Hugs and hoping the year turns out as beautiful ... as you wish it to be.
Raised by Wolvessinnamongirl on January 10th, 2017 08:04 am (UTC)
Lovely!
alycewilsonalycewilson on January 10th, 2017 09:47 pm (UTC)
Great goals!
Murielle: Scrunchedmurielle on January 10th, 2017 10:59 pm (UTC)
Beautiful! Yes! Foundation building is the best place to start!