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14 January 2017 @ 03:29 pm
[The Real LJ Idol Season 10] Week 5 Fear is the heart of love  
Shifts and Turns

Faith and Religion is
a very fine line
The Master who said "Love your neighbors"
Who gave His Blood to the faithful
And Rose from the Dead
Changing them with the Spirit
His Path twisted by
"What the Romans said"
Losing its Heart
Trapped in Fear
Love now being lost
In "What the Pastor
And your Elders said".
Not the root of His Choices
But Human Misinterpretation
Now Others
Are slowly reclaiming
The Truth and Trust
The Original Path
The cycle circles back
To Love



This was written for therealljidol Season 10 Week 5: Fear is the heart of love.



This entry was originally posted at http://dreamwriters.dreamwidth.org/36851.html.
 
 
 
Ink Wellpenpusher on January 16th, 2017 09:38 pm (UTC)
Are others doing that? I guess, at times, it seems very distant and nearly forgotten. Perhaps this is a good reminder!
Teo Sayseternal_ot on January 17th, 2017 12:41 pm (UTC)
I like the wind of change in the end stanzas. Nice take!
kick_galvanic, zagzagael, skull_theatrebleodswean on January 17th, 2017 04:56 pm (UTC)
Right off the bat you hooked me. Yes, the differences between "faith" and "religion". Nice job on this.
bewizebewize on January 17th, 2017 05:24 pm (UTC)
I so hope so.
rayasorayaso on January 17th, 2017 07:05 pm (UTC)
I love the direction you took with this. I think it is the only one with a religious take on the prompt that I have read at this point.
Jenmy_name_is_jenn on January 18th, 2017 07:41 pm (UTC)
Excellent take on the prompt!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphorshalfshellvenus on January 18th, 2017 08:07 pm (UTC)
Not the root of His Choices
But Human Misinterpretation

It's funny that the one simple lesson of "love" is the one most people have the hardest time finding. Trappings, tradition, and dogma so often outweigh it, and it takes almost a radical heart these days to see what was meant rather than what the message has become to far too many.